Friday, September 28, 2012

Three Months As An Intern

I just passed the three month mark as an intern for agent Jill Corcoran of Herman Agency, and thought it might be a good time to do a post about my experiences. I can't believe it's been three months already!

When I started interning I studied each query, sometimes reading them two or three times. I also read all 10 pages and really analyzed them. As you can image, it took me a long time to go through queries! But as I got more experienced and learned more about what Jill liked, I realized that I didn't need to read everything. I got better at picking out a strong concept from just the query, or great writing from just the first pages. (This is why you want your query and first pages to be as strong as possible!)

At first, reading queries felt like a TON of responsibility. I also felt REALLY bad rejecting other writers. I tried to personalize a lot of my rejections, but it started taking up way too much time and I had to stop. I only do it now in very rare cases. I know writers want feedback on why they're getting rejected, but it's very time consuming to give a reason to everyone who queries.

I also decided early on that I would never tweet about the queries I saw, no matter how how crazy or funny some of them were. I was once a writer in the query trenches too, and I remember seeing agents tweet about bad queries and then worrying that they were talking about me. It's fine if other agents or interns do it (these tweets can be helpful too) but I personally don't want to make anyone feel bad. I did some stupid things while querying too! (Maybe I'll save those for another post, haha.)

In the beginning, I flagged a lot more queries for Jill than I do now. I was still learning her tastes, but I definitely got better at that over time. Jill has a great list of things she's looking for on her website that I refer to a lot, and we've also discussed specific things she isn't interested in. And when she rejects something she often gives me her reason why, and that helps me learn what she wants and doesn't want.

I also try to find authors for Jill through other means - looking through online contests, talking to other writers about their books, reading the WriteOnCon forums, etc. In fact, a query I found in a contest resulted in an offer from Jill this week! This was the first time a query I'd recommended to her resulted in an offer, so I'm super excited! But as with all things in publishing, it's very subjective. Sometimes I'll love something but Jill won't. That's just the nature of this industry.

Overall, it's been a great experience, although I didn't realize just how much time it would take. Not only do I help Jill go through queries, but I read full manuscripts too. I have to make time for my internship, along with my own writing, my family, my volunteer work, and my full time job. But in a way, interning actually made me better at time management, because I had to prioritize things and not slack off as much.

Interning has also made me a better writer, because I read so many different queries and opening pages and have seen what works and what doesn't. I've also learned a ton about publishing from Jill, and she's always happy to answer my questions about the industry. I'm very lucky that I have two agents to learn from! And in return, I want to help other writers as much as possible.

On that note, do you have any questions about agents, querying, publishing, etc? Would you like query or first page critiques posted on the blog? Posts about query trends or querying advice? Q&A sessions? Let me know what you'd like to see here!

Edit: Jill responded to my post! Thanks Jill!

35 comments:

  1. I love all this intern insight! Great post!

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  2. Awesome post Liz! Loved reading your point of view. I can only imagine how invaluable this experience has been!

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    1. Thanks! It's been an amazing experience.

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  3. Thanks so much for this, Liz.

    My question is how much a mildly sucky/boring/generic query will harm if great pages are also included? Will the intern/assistant/agent still read the pages and overlook the so-so query? Or will confusion in the query/plot/teaser dissuade them enough to pass?

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    1. Ooh great question. I think I'll do a followup post with the answer to this and some of the other questions.

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  4. Sounds like you had a good internship. I would be interested in hearing more about the cliches you found in queries and stories...without singling anyone out, of course.

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    1. Great idea! I can definitely do a post about cliches.

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  5. I think it would be interesting reading all those queries and first pages.

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    1. It's definitely interesting...although you do see a lot of crazy or offensive queries too, unfortunately.

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  6. That's so exciting about finding a query that Jill was interested in and offered on. Must mean you're doing a great job! I find query crits (if done kindly) can be really helpful, but a lot of people do them/have resources to assist in the query process. I'd be more interested in the ins and outs of agents and publishing and more general "query help". Even though I'm in the query trenches, if an agent contacts me I feel a bit lost as so "professional protocol" etc. What inside wisdom have you gained from your agent? from your internship etc.?

    Glad I found your blog:)

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    1. I think you're right about the query crits - and that might be too specific to one person. I'll try to do more posts with general querying help and agent info. Thanks!

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  7. That sounds like a lot of work, but it also sounds incredibly ally rewarding. You're definitely developing an eye for good stories as Jill's intern. I'm sure this'll help bring your own writing to another level:)

    Nutschell
    www.thewritingnut.com

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  8. Love your insight into what it's like on the other side of the fence (as a writer in the submission process) and those of us who do received a kindly let down, we thank you, but those of us who are in it for the long haul, get that it's a busy and fast paced world and the form rejection will have to suffice.

    Thanks for posting- new follower!

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    1. Thanks! Sounds like you have a great attitude about the process.

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  9. This is super cool to read! I'm so happy you're having such a great experience!! :D

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  10. Great post! And yes to the query trends and Q/A sessions. That would be such a huge help!

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    1. Great! I'll definitely do some of those.

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  11. Liz, you are one of my favorite people EVER. I don't know how you do it. You're amazing! It's a wonder you're still sane. But I can imagine how much you've learned... and at such a fast pace. I find posts on querying, trends, reason why things get rejected, etc, fascinating. I'd love to see posts on any of that! ;D

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  12. Providing individual feedback is time consuming, and I realize it is not possible to receive personalized comments for every query you receive. So the idea to help writers improve, paying it forward, is very kind. People like you make people like me better! Thank you. I was fortunate to receive your individual comments in a contest. You rock!

    I'm interested in learning what a strong concept means. Writing is subjective, so does that mean the concept is also subjective? Thanks!

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    1. I'm glad my feedback was helpful. A strong concept definitely stands out but whether or not a person is interested in that concept would be subjective. I have an idea for a post on this, maybe I'll work on that...

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  13. Great post and very insightful. I'd like to see queries posted (I'll even offer my own) and the first page critiques. And any posts about query trends or querying advice. oh! And it would be nice to have a few Q&A sessions.

    And best of luck with your writing. ;-)

    Happy reading,
    ~Sherry

    Please Check out My Books!

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    1. Thanks! I'm working on a few posts on querying now.

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  14. Great post. I found your post to be really intriguing. Thanks for sharing and I'm definitely going to be following your blog from now on.

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  15. Any inside information about the submission process helps writers. I look forward to seeing your posts on querying and first pages. Thank you for sharing your posts with us.

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  16. Great post about your insights as an intern! I'd love to learn through the query and 1st pages critiques.

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  17. Love hearing about your intern adventures. I'm always fascinated how the different aspects of writing compliment and strengthen each other.

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  18. This was fascinating! It was great to hear about querying from your perspective. Good luck with the rest of your internship!

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  19. I can only imagine what a cool experience that is...and it would definitely be hard to reject people when you've been through that.

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  20. I really respect your choice not to tweet about the stuff you get. I can only imagine how much this has helped your writing, editing, refining process. I wish I had the time to do what you do. I barely have time to blog anymore. Can't wait to see you guys this weekend!

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  21. I appreciate the fact that you put heart into your work and can see things from the writer's point of view. It has to be a difficult and time consuming task. Of course, most writers feel like their works are revolutionary. They may well be. What are your thought about querying about a series? Do you present one of the stories (or books) or as a whole?
    Very interesting post. Thank you.

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