Natalie has picked the winners:
The winner of the query and first 10 page critique is:
VERY second close was the doll story; very creepy!
I do also want to make 30-page request to see (not critique): Kris’s house novel, when he’s finished it! If the connected-to-house story by Cortney is a novel and not just a short, I’d like to see 30 pages of that too.
Congrats to our winners! Please email Natalie at email@example.com with the subject line of CONTEST WINNER (or REQUEST).
Again, thank you to everyone who entered. I really enjoyed reading all of your entries, and I hope to do another contest like this in the future!